tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-95772246000614589.post267744991713707928..comments2023-03-24T05:12:35.232-07:00Comments on Dianne's Wordshop: NAKEDNESSDianne Tchirhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18173489461262459993noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-95772246000614589.post-28659870146970698852010-09-03T07:40:31.101-07:002010-09-03T07:40:31.101-07:00I love the theme of being one with the elements of...I love the theme of being one with the elements of nature; although 'incomplete' as a single unit the narrator concludes by connecting with what completes him/her. Nice wordplay between 'nakedness' and the 'streaking' comet btw! ;)SkyWing Presshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03680547146670961465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-95772246000614589.post-34529203825481312032010-09-02T02:12:40.178-07:002010-09-02T02:12:40.178-07:00Loneliness and isolation are naked spaces. They so...Loneliness and isolation are naked spaces. They sometimes have "no glitter or shine" are "incomplete" but sensual realms to reflect,"indulging..senses" and try to grab the tail of affections "comet" to be "one in this history of time"..Everything in the universe is born naked and remains that way even in death. Only we clothe it and try to disguise who we really are...separating ourselves from the natural "nakedness" of nature...but in so doing, we think and question the reason for it all. This poem has stardust in its understanding.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-95772246000614589.post-56085729682654119822010-09-01T10:23:22.616-07:002010-09-01T10:23:22.616-07:00your words makes the image more tangible than bein...your words makes the image more tangible than being just the creation of the mind. i feel like swimming and plays with water myself. so sensuous, yet not erotic. really well done poem.Nadia Mohammedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03462355780396120620noreply@blogger.com