We move through space
vacuum forces
sound stones
release nets of
cloudy feelings
We confuse life's destiny
shout refuge from
stormy skies
Empty hands join
showering rebirth
Weepy arms lend
solace to wavering hands
gently touching flesh
finding
malice gone
resting inside
outside of me
copyright: Dianne Tchir August10, 2010
I love the images in the first stanze..empty..hard..uncertain..then putting the world in its own compartment..letting feelings breathe and blossom. I likes this!
ReplyDeleteI like the way it sails the reader from uncertainty through calmness, Nice and brief.
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Najma Pirani
from the confusion of our world comes the confusion of our feelings. i liked the reflection of the inner confusion into the outside, it puts us in a direct relation to our world rather than being detached from it.
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