Thursday, August 12, 2010

TANGIBLE

I had to make you concrete
you became the sketch
i  made several strokes
            on you
hoping you could feel
i curved, filled and feathered
    crosshatched
stroked you diagonally
vertically and horizontally

I could feel your presence
   desire to gain entry
  i have finished you
            but
      cannot touch you

copyright: D.M. Tchir Aug. 12,2010

2 comments:

  1. The greatest work of art is who we love, a painting far batter than anything a Picasso, or a Da Vinci, could have produced. Yet it remains a work of art, insensible to touch, in a world of it's own...

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  2. This quilt of flesh is so "Tangible" you can feel and hear the bodies touching and moving..finished..then out of reach. A gem!

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